Monday 28 February 2011

updated script

The Last Man Standing. Swift Getaway Productions

This is the main dialogue scene...the majority of the film is based around an action sequence.

Starring:

Georgie Watson: Jimmy 'JJ' Jones

Joe Haddow: Joseph 'The Bear' Bayter

Ellis Snell: Hernay Kapala 'Moss'

Ed Stow: Big Eddy

Jack Barber: Jackie B

plus many more...
Script:

(Ambient discussion) - In the background of the setting.

Narration: 
Close up of Jimmy Jones smoking 

Jackie B : throwing chips into pile  i raise

Jimmy Jones :  you feeling lucky hernay 

Jackie B: twisting a pocket knife

Hernay : Jimmy you joker 

Jackie B : We playing cards or what ?

Hernay : Well we would be if that joker delivering the package actually got her on time 

(Tracking shot) of Big Eddy with briefcase containing "drug money"  as he approaches gangs headquaters

Jackie B finally bout time 

Big Eddy : Its all here 

low angle shot of the breifcase with JJ in the background

Jimmy Jones: So its all going ahead yh 

High angle shot of group putting their glasses together 

Group opens the briefcase (group shot)

(close up) of content of the briefcase containing ripped up paper 

Jimmy Jones: What the f*** ! (beeped out)

Freeze frames of group drawing guns 

(mid shot) of hernay cocking gun

(long shot) of Big Eddy making a run for it 

Hernay fires the gun

silence: (blank shot) production company fades in (A Swift Getaway Production presents) 

Jimmy Jones : nice shot Hernay

Hernay : Thanks 

Jackie B: F*** the cops (beeped out)

(long shot) of cops entering the building

Jimmy Jones: Theirs the assholes

Machine gun firing at the cops
cops ducking

(tracking shot) of the gang leaving the room

(Jump scene/tracking shot) of cops chasing the gang

(mid close) up of Jackie B hiding under the table

(mid long shot) of cop searching the place 

(two shot) showing the cop being shot off some stairs 

(Low angle shot) of the cop falling to the floor 

Jump scene 

(Long shot) of Jackie B being shot in the back by a cop while attempting to make a run for it 

(low angle shot) of body on the ground and cop approaching the body 

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