Wednesday 12 January 2011

Brief outline of Script

The Last Man Standing.    Swift Getaway Productions

This is the main dialogue scene...the majority of the film is based around an action sequence.

Starring:

Georgie Watson: Jimmy 'JJ' Jones

Joe Haddow: Joseph 'The Bear' Bayter

Ellis Snell: Hernay Kapala 'Ghost'

Ed Stow: Big Eddy 

Lawrence Hart: Antonio Frebarro 'Toni'

Jack Barber: Jackie B

plus many more...

Script:

(Ambient discussion) - In the background of the setting.

Narration: 


Close up of Eddys name tag, which then pans out to him carrying a tray,wearing a waiters outfit (black suit, bow tie etc.....etc.  
Eddy then turns around to walk across the bar. 

Extra: Hey Eddy, get yourself something nice from me.

Extra: Hey watch it! ..oh its you Edd. - Edd is carrying tray of drinks.

(background chatter)

Introduction to each character - Screen shot of each person.

Eddy: Whispers into Jackie B's ear (creates mystery)

Group at the card table (Joseph, Jimmy etc.): Eddy!! Get over here

Joseph: Yeah Eddy can you get us, ehh... just get us the usual ...oh and charge it to my tab.

Jimmy: You're too kind (laughing sarcastically)

Joseph: Ahh quit busting my balls.. (laughing)

Jackie: Stick or Twist Hernay?

Hernay: Ehhh Twist please..

Jackie: Certainly Sir..(laughing)

Hernay: You fucking joker.

Jackie: What you doing Joe?

Joseph: Just sorting my shoe - the camera catches a glimpse of a gun Joe has holstered around his ankle.

Jackie B: So what you doing?

Joe: I'll Stick

Jimmy: Stick? haha Alright there ya blouse   (laughing)

Joe: Haha..you should see my hand

Jackie: And you H?

H: I'm pretty good...so I'll stick.

Jackie: Yeah whatever

Eddy enters with drinks tray.

Hernay: Finally Edd...jeez whats with you today

Edd: Just cant beleive you guys can forget about it so quickly.

Joe: Forget about what?

Jimmy: Yeah What?

Edd: About the Job that we pulled the other day...You know the one that went wrong!

Hernay: Woah..Woah calm down!

Jimmy: Yeah ..lets not make a scene.

Ant enters

Ant: Make a scene..what in this place! Ahhhaaaa (laughing)

Joe: Toni my friend...just how are you doing?

Group: Hey..

Ant: Im good thankyou.

Hernay: Then sit down, have a drink

Ant: You know what...maybe I will. Infact Jackie deal me in.

Jackie: Sure sir

Ant: Please... (reassures Jackie)

Joe: So Toni

Ant: JJ, hows the mrs? (Grinning mysteriously)

Jimmy: Guys,Guys....shes fine ;) (laughing sarcastically, looks around for attention)*group laughs*

Joe: I bet she is!

Hernay: Hey edd, pass me that brandy.

Edd: right away buddy.

Hernay: oh and one of those fine cigars

(Ed passes the cigar over and as hernay creeps up to recieve it the camera catches a gun strapped to his waist)

[Rest of the group Laugh]

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